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Help Point [Video]

 

By Omeleto

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A man named Jack has returned from a trip abroad, and can’t remember where he left his car in his home airport’s parking lot. As he wanders the gigantic lot, he comes across a beautiful woman named Maya, who has also forgotten her location.

The two call the help point, where an agent named Stephen helps to locate their vehicles, leaving Jack and Maya to chat while they wait. But the conversation doesn’t go quite the way that Jack expects.

Written and directed by Andrew Margetson, this charming, witty and unexpected romantic short is undeniably well-crafted in its astute directing, relatable and compelling performances and clever writing, and all these elements are woven together with a certain lightness and ease that never feels heavy-handed.

Instead, there’s a quietly steady foundation of excellence all around in the craftsmanship. The camera work and cinematography are never flamboyant and are in fact rather muted, offering a sense of realism. And as the storytelling develops with equally steady pacing, we seem to be heading into serious drama territory, as the two characters deal with the unexpected vulnerability that has bubbled up.

Actors Cian Barry and Ruta Getmintas play Jack and Maya with a responsiveness and openness that draws viewers in, both in the interpersonal trauma being revealed and the build-up between two strangers who may have a spark between them.

But just when the narrative seems to go down one road, it deftly pivots with a puncture of a plot “twist” that steers it into unexpected, but highly entertaining, territory. What’s more, the story takes this shift and runs with it, playing it out with the same ease and excellence — much to Jack’s chagrin, but the audience’s delight.

Romantic narratives require one or both characters to overcome obstacles in order to be together, and part of the interest and pleasure is watching the potential work through these to be together. But the obstacles that Jack eventually deals with in his attempts to impress and connect with Maya are so unexpected and funny that they bring a freshness to the romance format while keeping the film’s appealing naturalness in tone and execution and illustrating an old dictum we never get tired of. All is fair in love and war, as the saying goes — and you never know where the next adversary will pop up.

 

Transcript provided by YouTube:

00:14
um
00:42
[Music]
00:58
[Music]
01:29
[Music]
01:39
not mine not mine either i don’t
01:42
suppose you’ve seen a silver astra
01:46
how long have you been living oh you
01:48
know not long
01:50
really okay quite long
01:53
yeah i’ve been walking for miles i’ve
01:56
absolutely no idea what my car is
01:58
maybe it’s been stolen unlikely
02:02
there must be a procedure here this must
02:04
happen all the time
02:06
well maybe if we go to the bus stop it
02:08
might be some emergency phone or
02:10
something
02:12
good idea
02:20
what are you doing if you touch your
02:22
keys to your head your head acts as an
02:24
antenna and the signal goes further
02:30
obviously not far enough though so why
02:32
weren’t you doing this before
02:34
it does look a bit stupid well now you
02:36
don’t mind
02:39
a friend of mine who went to disneyland
02:41
told me he tied a helium balloon to his
02:43
hire car when he parked it there
02:44
that’s such a good idea i wish i’d done
02:46
that some kid’s always going to come
02:48
along and nick a nice shiny balloon
02:49
sticking out a car window right
02:52
yeah space
03:02
hello special assistants and disabled
03:04
helpline
03:05
hi um sorry to bother you but we’ve lost
03:08
our cars
03:09
do you need special assistance or are
03:11
you disabled in any way
03:13
no we but we do need assistance in
03:16
finding the cars so you’re not disabled
03:21
no you’ve lost your car
03:25
in spite of all the signs
03:29
no and actually we’ve we’ve lost two
03:31
cars
03:32
[Music]
03:34
there is a charge for this and it’ll
03:35
take around 20 minutes the charge is
03:37
14.99
03:39
per car jesus
03:45
okay okay we’re idiots we’ll pay the
03:47
idiot charge
03:55
bollocks
03:58
what i’m a double idiot
04:02
we should have just paid for one car
04:03
search and then use that card to find
04:05
the other one
04:06
right i’m gonna call him back
04:20
and we spoke a couple of minutes ago
04:23
we’re the idiots who lost their cars
04:26
i just wanted to cancel one of the
04:27
co-location charges
04:32
and the transaction has been completed
04:35
you’re joking
04:37
i am not i think i’d say you could just
04:41
it’s fine
04:56
thanks
05:03
so 20 minutes
05:08
what’s your name oh i’m jack
05:13
where have you come from jack frankfurt
05:17
i’ve been at an agricultural trade fair
05:21
die by tractors cool
05:26
it’s not really yeah tractors are great
05:30
everyone loves a tractor that will be
05:32
everyone who’s not been to the frankfurt
05:33
tractor expo
05:35
okay track together aka
05:38
trapped together
05:43
what about you i’m maya
05:47
i have been in detroit
05:50
at my mother’s funeral oh
05:54
yeah sorry i know it’s fine i hated her
06:00
why she walked out on me when i was a
06:03
kid
06:04
right
06:09
it’s really weird actually going to a
06:12
funeral and
06:13
listening to everyone talk about how
06:15
wonderful and special and unique she was
06:17
strangest experience of my life it was
06:20
just
06:21
numb felt nothing
06:24
i understand track together wasn’t
06:26
exactly a party either
06:30
there’s all these people sobbing around
06:32
me
06:33
i just thought nothing it’s just
06:37
nagging resentment
06:42
at one point i just wanted to stand up
06:43
and say shut up
06:45
she wasn’t a saint she hurt people
06:50
it doesn’t matter how creative or clever
06:53
she was
06:56
deep down she was not kind and she was
06:58
not loving and she was not caring she
07:00
walked out on three young children when
07:01
they were so young
07:03
and they have spent the rest of their
07:04
lives trying to come to terms with that
07:05
maybe
07:06
just maybe in dying she’ll help that
07:09
pain go away
07:14
wow
07:16
it’s a bit like the massey mf9 i mean no
07:20
matter how
07:21
cool and sexy it looks on the field
07:23
underneath
07:24
is just a pig
07:30
i’m sorry
07:35
don’t be it’s fine that my mother was
07:38
like a tractor
07:43
truly though nothing’s quite like to
07:44
track together
07:50
part agricultural part executive
07:54
sharp suits and ready cheeks all around
07:57
but you you
07:58
should come sometime thanks no thanks
08:05
excuse me i said no thanks i don’t want
08:08
to go with you to
08:10
track together or whatever it is i
08:12
wasn’t asking you
08:15
have you been listening to our entire
08:17
conversation why was it that good
08:19
have you found our cars yet well i’d
08:22
hate to cut
08:22
your little drinks party but your
08:24
vehicles have indeed been located
08:27
hold up how do you know we’ve been
08:29
drinking
08:30
all sorts of things mr jack bannister
08:32
home security solutions
08:34
just arrived from glasgow what
08:38
did you lie to me did he lie to me yes
08:41
he did
08:45
look i’m really sorry
08:48
i’ve always liked tractors and i made
08:50
you laugh
08:52
i told you all about my mother yes she
08:55
did
08:55
jack shut up you
08:59
your characters are complicated
09:01
positions 38 and 41 respectively
09:04
very close to each other now there’s a
09:06
special concession
09:16
that makes perfect sense thank you
09:18
steven
09:20
thank you stephen are you flirting with
09:22
the help i think you’ll find his name is
09:23
stephen
09:24
yeah jack i think you’ll find my name’s
09:26
stephen
09:28
look this this is completely ridiculous
09:31
let me
09:31
help you with your back
09:38
thank you stephen
09:43
you stephen
09:54
[Music]
10:06
next time to impress you i’ll actually
10:08
bring a tractor
10:10
that’ll be difficult to lose i’m sorry
10:13
again
10:14
about making up that stuff it’s fine
10:17
it’s funny
10:23
where are you headed to london
10:26
me too maybe we could go for a drink
10:32
maybe follow me
11:29
no you jack
11:41
[Applause]
11:44
[Music]
12:12
[Music]
12:25
[Music]
12:38
you

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